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Guide to Student Success
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Prepare
Yourself
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Real
Tools
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What
Do I Need to Do?
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Is
It Going to Be Hard?
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So
Why Is This Class Hard?
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Getting
Help
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The
Specific Road to Success
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Appendix
(Grades)
Writing Guide
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What
Is Writing?
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Speed-Writing
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The
Marked-Up Paper
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Where
to Start: Preparation
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Where
to Start: Assessment
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Getting
that Paper Going
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The
Rhetorical Situation
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Occasion
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Audience
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Topic
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Purpose
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Writing
the Paper
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Main
Idea
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Assertions
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Organization
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Development
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Beginnings
and Endings
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Analysis
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Critical
Thinking and Creativity
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Construction
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Presentation
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Paper Length
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The
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How can you be successful in
your Social Science Classes? The Guides below
offer some great tips to get you started. The
first is a "Guide to Student Success in
Anthropology and Sociology Courses." It
addresses ways to plan and organize to be more
successful in your social science courses. The
second is a writing guide which can assist you in
writing class essays and papers. You can scroll down or choose
the topics from the menu at the left of this page.
A Guide to Student
Success in Anthropology and Sociology Courses
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Prepare
Yourself
You have enrolled in a social science course. This class
will allow you to develop some useful skills as well as
consider some interesting case studies and topics. The
social sciences consider the fascinating aspects of
humanity, including what it means to be human, how humans
interact, the history and origins of humans, the specific
institutions that have formed as a part of humanity. The
social sciences are challenging to some people. In
general we live in a society where critical thinking and
the analysis of our everyday lives is not stressed. In
our courses we may sometimes find that anthropological
and sociological ideas challenge us because they are
new—they are perspectives that we not been exposed
to prior to our taking a class in the social sciences.
Others find social science courses to be difficult
because people wrongly assume that social science is
“easy science,” “soft science,” etc.
People also assume that they “already know it”
when they enter an anthropology or sociology course. This
assumption is a natural one: “Hey, this course is
about people…I’m a person…so this class
should be a piece of cake.” As we shall see shortly,
neither of these assumptions hold water. The social
sciences are as scientific as math, chemistry, biology
and the like…in fact they are even more complex than
the natural sciences as our courses cover the range of
issues associated with “being human.” And
though you may know a lot about our society, other
cultures and the like, we will be adding to your
perspectives in this class. So it’s great to be
confident when entering the social science classroom, but
at the same time be prepared!
Real
Tools
We all enroll in our courses for a variety of reasons.
Sometimes we are fulfilling a requirement, other times we
take a particular class for fun. Whatever your reason is
for taking this course get interested in this class. Even
if you end up majoring in a non social science
discipline, you will no doubt benefit from the ideas and
perspectives which you will gain in this course. I always
tell people to forget about the reason behind taking a
class and instead think of how the class can be engaging
for you. Get into it and make this class and all your
classes your own! If there is one thing you will learn
from this class, it is perspective. Namely, learning new
perspectives. We often say that the social sciences have
much akin to the arts and humanities. As one
anthropologist once said, the social sciences give us all
an art of awareness. It is an art we can use in our
everyday lives—be it in the workplace, in a future
class, in a relationship or even at the grocery store!
What are some of these tools?
• This
course will prepare you to critically think. Critical
thinking is a necessary tool that you will value
throughout your life.
• This
course will offer you specific social science methods,
theories and perspectives.
• This
course will provide you with knowledge…something
which none of us can live without!
• All
of these together can be used for both personal
empowerment and the empowerment of others.
What
Do I Need to Do?
You have signed up for a social science course. Depending
on your personal history, this class may be new to you in
its perspectives, approaches, assignments, etc.
Regardless of this it is important to start on the right
track in the class. First: Commit yourself to this class.
This means that you think of this class not as a
requirement or a place where you come to meet for two
times a week. A class is an opportunity not just for
learning but for growth. Commit yourself to the class and
do whatever you need to do to be successful. If you
cannot make this commitment to this class and to your
educational growth, I recommend finding another class.
For those of you who are serious about the course, I will
make it more than worth your while. Second: Understand
that learning is a continual process. You cannot be
successful in this or any other class if you think of
learning as reading your assignment for the day and
coming to class. In addition to doing the
basics—reading your assignments, being prepared for
class, and attending class—you ought to think of
learning as a continual process. When you dedicate
yourself to learning you will begin to see new
connections between our class deliberations and your
personal world. I hope that this class will not only open
up new intellectual vistas for you, but that it will
inspire you to take a new approach to learning. In the
past I have heard the following questions asked of me or
other teachers on campus:
• Is
this going to be on the test? (followed by one’s
notebook being put away if the answer to the question was
“no.”)
• Why
are we watching this film?
• D
o we have to know this article well? It was too hard to
read…there were too many big words!
• What
do I have to do to pull a C in this class?
• Can
I turn in my paper late?
• Is
this class going to be fun?
I would like you to critically think about these
questions and what they imply. They suggest to me that
some people are not focused on education as a commitment
and as a process of continual growth; instead I believe
that they see education as something that is to be gotten
through—as a means to an end. Education should not
be understood through a “banking model,” as
Paulo Friere argued, but as a process of self-discovery
and personal empowerment.
Is
It Going to Be Hard?
People talk on campus about the “easy classes”
and the “hard classes.” I am not exactly sure
which classes these people are speaking of, but I have a
sense that people prioritize their schedules with some
loose notion of level of class difficulty in mind. Some
people say that my classes are difficult, to which I
respond, “They are difficult if you don’t do
the work!” I do hope to challenge you in this class,
but I want to convince you that this is a good thing. If
you only focus on getting a certain grade in this class
you have limited your ability for both growth and
commitment to the real goals of quality learning. Part of
what we need to look at is REALITY. This class is real,
at least as far as we know in terms of our acceptance of
perception and the like, and it will require work and
commitment on your part. In the past some people have
uttered these phrases:
• This
is community college.
Response: Community college = Harvard (or favorite school
of your choice)
• This
isn’t real college.
Response: This is as real as it gets!
When someone says phrase one I usually explain that we
will do the same sorts of assignments, do the same
readings, watch the same films and have the same sorts of
discussions that people do at Harvard University or any
other school. I do not and will not adjust assignments,
readings or the like because some people consider
community college to be at a different level of education
when compared to other institutions.
So
Why Is This Class Hard?
There are a few answers to this question. One is that it
challenges you to think about the world in new ways. It
is always difficult to suspend disbelief and consider the
world using a new way of seeing. Another is that you are
not doing the necessary things to make the class less
difficult. Here is an actual paper assignment for an
introductory (first year) class at the University of
California Davis.
Drawing
on your readings on psychoanalysis, answer the following
question:
The theories of French psychoanalyst Jacques Lacan draw
heavily on the Freudian model of psychosexual
development. Yet they also present new modes of reading
Freud’s classic concepts. Briefly outline the
Lacanian model of development, indicating how he reworks
the Freudian model. In what ways, if any, might
Lacan’s model prove to be more conducive to feminist
inquiry than Freud? In your answer you should refer to
and explain such concepts as “mirror image,”
“the law of the Father,” “the
Imaginary,” “the Symbolic” to name a few.
Here is a paper assignment for a Ph.D. seminar at Rice
University:
In
the first part of the paper describe Gadamer’s model
of understanding. How does understanding or appropriation
work according to Gadamer? How do
prejudice/authority/tradition function in this model of
understanding? Discuss the consequences of Gadamer’s
idea of consciousness exposed to the effects of history
and the “fusion of history.” In the second
part, look at this article describing Alamo Village, a
movie set with a simulacrum of the Alamo that has become
a tourist site. Using Gadamer’s model of
understanding, think about what happens when Alamo
Village interprets the historical event said to be
pivotal in the “creation of Texas.” Can you use
this Texan example to critique the configuration of
prejudice/authority/tradition in Gadamer?
Clearly,
both papers present challenging assignments. We might
expect the Ph.D. assignment to be difficult, but we might
also be surprised when we read over the paper assignment
for a first-year/introductory course. I stress the need
to develop your writing, analytical and critical-thinking
skills. Regardless of the next step you will take, you
will not only need writing skills, you will need great
writing skills, as well as other skills. You should make
every possible effort to develop your writing and course
skills. A major step in this direction is to become
familiar with what is expected of you as a student:
Assignments
—What are they?
—What will they require me to do?
—When are they due?
—How should I budget my time to finish them?
—Where can I go to get assistance if they become a
problem?
Getting
Help
There are a number of resources on campus to take
advantage of if you experience difficulties in this or
any other class. These include:
The Instructor: use office hours to your
advantage. I can answer your questions, help you with
your study skills, give you guidance on papers and other
assignments. I am also happy discussing our other LTCC
social science courses and what you can do with a social
science major.
The Disability Resource Center: Our very fine DRC
can assist you with any problems you have relative to
studying, test taking, note taking, etc. Please contact
them should you require their services. In the past I
have accommodated many students who have required
different test accommodations.
The Learning Assistance Center: The LAC is a great
place to go to get help on your class assignments,
especially papers. Tutors there can help you with paper
writing skills and other areas related to your LTCC
education.
Your Counselor: Your counselor is a very important
person who sees you thorough the course of your education
at LTCC. By talking to you about your personal goals as a
student and as a person, they can help you plan your
future at LTCC and beyond.
The Instruction Office: Should you have a dispute
during the course of your education, the great people in
the Instruction Office are there to help resolve any such
conflicts.
Your Family and Friends: Believe it or not, I
always tell people to make use of their college contacts.
Your friends can be useful not just in terms of
socializing but also in terms of helping you (and you
helping them) with your classes. Study groups and paper
writing parties are just two examples of creating an
educational community at Lake Tahoe Community College.
The
Specific Road to Success
I have covered some general areas of concern which I feel
relate to your future in this class. Now, you are
probably wondering, what do I need to do to be successful
in this class? Here are a few ideas…
• Read
your syllabus and the guides I have provided you. Both
contain important information which will help you to
succeed in this class. It is absolutely your
responsibility to understand what is given to you in your
syllabus. This especially applies to things like due
dates. Last year I remember a student who came unprepared
to class. This student did not know that there was a
presentation that day. Needless to say the student was
embarrassed, but ultimately it was the student’s
fault because this person had not read the syllabus. You
may wish to highlight specific due dates for papers,
exams, presentations and the like on your syllabus. This
way you will not forget an important due date. Or, as I
suggest below, you might come up with an assignments
calendar to help you plan your work on completing the
assignment.
• Prepare
yourself for the class. We all bring different skills to
our classes. As a student I remember courses where I had
only a few minutes of outside preparation and others that
took me hours to prepare. When you do not understand
anything in our class, make sure that you get help. As I
suggested earlier, it is very important to take a
proactive approach to all of your classes. If you do not
express that you are having difficulty with one of your
classes, no one will be able to help you. You must take
the first step. Come to me and we will work together, use
the great campus resources, and make sure that your path
to educational success is envisioned.
•
Plan, plan,
plan. I cannot underestimate the need to involve planning
in your education. Simply coming to class and doing your
reading is not enough. I always provide detailed syllabi
to you. I feel that by giving you all of the information
about course assignments (when they are due, what they
involve, etc.) that you will be able to better plan your
quarter. Keep in mind that things start off slowly during
the quarter, pick up a little speed, get slower again and
then get real fast at the end of the quarter. By a
quarter’s end you are trying to finish any number of
papers, prepare for final exams and perhaps work on class
presentations. The end of a quarter is a very stressful
time and it is important to do any planning that you can
to alleviate the stress and pressure that comes with
taking classes in a quarter system. One suggestion I
would like to introduce is an Assignments Calendar. Here
is a sample:
Course:
Anthropology
WEEK 1
(study for quiz)
WEEK 2
(brainstorm paper topic)
WEEK 3
(quiz)
(paper outline)
WEEK 4
(go over paper with
instructor)
• Attend class.
Attending class is very important. If you miss many
classes you will not be successful in the class. A main
reason is that you will miss information that you will
need to complete exams and assignments. A bigger reason
is that you miss much needed perspective. In any class
you will receive information about the discipline which
you are learning as well as the perspective associated
with that discipline. In the social sciences we are
interested in developing critical thinking skills,
understanding new ways of looking at the world, and
considering the diversity of peoples, places and ideas
that exist in the history of humanity. By missing class
you will not only fail to receive important course
information, but you will also lose out on the
perspective which I hope to impart on you in this class.
• Be
active in class. In some classes you can do your
homework, turn in all of your assignments, get great
grades on exams and receive an A grade even if you miss
most of the classes during the quarter. This is NOT one
of those classes. In the social sciences I like to say
that course knowledge is worked out. We do not simply
memorize a concept, apply it and expect that we
understand the discipline. In anthropology and sociology
you will be required to attend and actively participate
in classes. If you do not you will not be able to
acquire, understand and personally apply the ideas you
have learned.
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Appendix: Guide to
Grades
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Grades and what you need to get a particular
grade are outlined on the course syllabus, but
you might be wondering what it generally takes to
be successful in an Anthropology or Sociology
class. Here is a general guide to grades.
A
• Is successful on examinations and quizzes,
generally doing A or B work on them. This level of work
requires much studying for the exams. Cramming at the
last minute will not result in A or B work on
examinations.
• Works on papers to a high level of mastery. This
means that work will be free of typos, unclear
construction and will have a high command of content.
• Is very active in class participation, speaking
more than once per class period. Clearly shows a mastery
of reading concepts by exhibiting them in class
participation.
B
• Is successful on examinations and quizzes, but may
have a few low grades, perhaps in the C range. Knows the
material well, but does not have high mastery of it.
• Works on papers to a good level of mastery. There
may be some typos and construction problems, as well as
problems with content, but overall the paper is a strong
writing effort.
• Is active in class participation, speaking
throughout the week. Shows a mastery of reading concepts
by exhibiting them in class participation.
C
• Has some difficulty with examinations and does not
have many of the course concepts down. Receives low
grades on the exams.
• Papers may have major problems in construction,
including numerous typos, and there are problems with
clarity, especially in terms of content.
• Participation is low and the person does not
demonstrate competency of the course materials in class.
Person rarely speaks in class. Person may miss classes
frequently.
D and F
• Major difficulties with the examinations and
quizzes, including D/F grades on one or more of them.
• Papers may have major problems in construction,
including numerous typos, and there are problems with
clarity, especially in terms of content. As well, some of
them are not turned in or they are turned in late.
• The person does not speak in class and receives
only attendance credit for most class periods in the
quarter. Person misses numerous classes during the
quarter.
Of course, there is much variance to the
guidelines I have listed here. You can mess up on
an exam and still bring up your final grade with
great participation and good work on the papers.
I advise all of you to track your course work
throughout the quarter. A running total of your
points is helpful in knowing your standing in the
class. You may wish to keep such a total in a
binder or other handy place.
The real key to being successful
in the class is to be proactive.
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A Guide for Writing Quality Papers in
Anthropology and Sociology Courses
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What
Is Writing?
We often think of writing as a product—a book that
we might read or, more commonly, a paper that we produce
for a class. Writing is seen as something that is
finished, an end. In fact we should more properly think
of writing as a process. It is something that is done to
get somewhere, as a means to the end of the text or
paper. As a process we realize that writing is something
we must work on. Contrary to popular opinion, writing is
not easy, and it is not something that can be done
quickly. Like a work of art, writing is something that
must be worked upon. One source on the subject of writing
suggests that “all effective writing begins with
careful observation—“being forever on the
alert” and “looking always at what is to be
seen”—and that composing is a recursive process
of seeing and writing. Opening your eyes and taking a
closer look around you not only gives you subjects and
ideas to write about (which are necessary initial
ingredients in writing) but also leads to effective
writing” (Seeing & Writing, McQuade &
McQuade, St. Martin’s, 2000, pp. xlv-xlvi). Writing
is never something that just happens.
Speed-Writing
In his new text Faster: The Acceleration of Just about
Everything, James Gleick offers a thesis on American
society as being more and more dominated by speed. The
process of time-consuming reading has been supplanted by
speed-reading. Even on-line services offer busy workers
the opportunity to have the major stories of the top
newspapers summarized for a quick read. We are all
products of our culture and we can be sure that our
writing practices follow from our cultural practices. In
a society fixated on saving time and finding the path of
least resistance, we have been wrongly socialized in our
writing practices. Instead of seeing writing as a
time-consuming—yes, sometimes laborious, but very
often enjoyable—process, we assume that we can write
quickly and that somehow our writing will be
“quality writing.” This assumption is one we
have to challenge and we need to realize that writing, to
reiterate, is a process that must take time if we expect
to produce writing that is clear, thoughtful, critical
and reflexive.
The
Marked-Up Paper
No one enjoys getting a paper back that is full of marks.
It is often a challenge to our ego to accept that we are
not good writers or that our thoughts have not been
clearly communicated to our readers. Writing improvement
begins with realization. When you get a paper back that
has marks on it, do not view these marks as an attack on
your character or on your skills as a writer. Rather,
think of them as guides to self-realization and writing
improvement. Even the greatest writers have said that no
author is immune from critiques and suggestions that will
improve that author’s written work.
Where
to Start: Preparation
There are two contexts of writing that we generally think
about in our courses. One is preparing to write. We know
that we have a paper assignment for Sociology 101 and we
realize that we have to get that assignment done by a
particular date. We are all different writers, and some
of us plan our papers weeks in advance, others write them
the day before they are due. If we think about writing as
a process we should know that the writer who plans ahead
of time will always produce the quality writing. Think of
developing writing plans in which you decide how to
accomplish different phases of the paper assignment.
Pre-writing is something which should be done for social
science papers, yet we wrongly assume that this social
science class is an “ideas” class, not a
writing class, and we often forget that we must be
writers first before we can hope to communicate our ideas
as students of social science. A first key to our writing
in this class is preparation. Plan your writing. Just as
a great recipe must be prepared, worked out and refined
in steps, so too should your writing for these courses.
Where
to Start: Assessment
The second context of writing in this class is
assessment. Here too we wrongly believe that the only
assessment for our writing is the instructor—the
sometimes mean person who gives us back our paper full of
marks, lines and editorial comments. In fact the first
line of assessment for your writing is you! When you
write anything, be it for this class, another class, or
for your own personal journal, make sure that you read
and reread your own work. One method of self-assessment
which I have found to be successful is to read my papers
out loud. This assists with two vital components of
writing: (1) Form—have I said the things I wish to
say correctly, or have I found some grammatical and
spelling errors? (2) Content—what have I said and
will my reader understand what I have said? By
verbalizing the writing process we create a more
reflexive and constructive context for our papers and
assignments. A second method of self-assessment is a
social context of writing. In some social science
classes, such as research methods, we actually read our
work aloud in the class. In most courses we do not have
the time to do so, and too often our only reader is the
instructor—again, the bad person who marks up our
papers. I want to stress a second option that may help
improve your class projects. This is giving your paper to
a friend, family member, or acquaintance, perhaps a
person in this very class. By having someone else read
your paper you again assess potential problems with form
and content, but more importantly, your having another
person read your work establishes a secondary context of
readership. A non-biased reader can often catch mistakes
that you have made. As well, social reading is fun!
Getting
that Paper Going
Though our culture leads us to believe the contrary,
writing is never easy. We have all felt that blank
feeling that precedes a big paper assignment and we know
that frustration very often accompanies the writing
process. One excellent idea that may help all of you to
write is to pick up a writing guide. These handbooks are
useful in offering suggestions on how to get started on
papers, as well as guide you through the formal and
content aspects of writing. One such guide, Writing from
A to Z, offers the following useful discussion of the
writing process. The authors suggest that any written
assignment involves a rhetorical situation, occasion,
audience, topic and purpose. Review these below before
you write your next paper.
The
Rhetorical Situation
“Every act of writing is done in a particular
context, called the rhetorical situation” (p. 7).
The book suggests the following questions be asked prior
to writing:
(1) What have I already read or written that is similar
to this assignment? What are my strengths and weaknesses?
How can I address them when writing this paper?
(2) What is the context for writing? What are the
requirements for length? How much time should I allot for
planning and organizing, drafting and revising a piece of
this length? What should my tone be?
(3) Who am I writing for? Can my peers understand what
I’m saying? Am I fulfilling the criteria established
by my instructor? How much revising and polishing will be
necessary to meet the instructor’s standards? What
format should I use?
(4) What do I know about this topic? What experiences can
I draw on? Should I go to the library for additional
information? How much information is necessary for a
paper of this length?
(5) Why am I writing? Should I focus on describing the
topic, explaining its purpose, or persuading my readers
to accept my position?
Occasion
Occasion relates to the reason why you begin to write.
Obviously the occasion for writing in this class is for
the purpose of finishing a paper assignment. Keep this in
mind when writing, especially as your paper involves tone
and voice. Slang terms, such as “you know,”
“so” and “kinda” should be avoided
unless your use of slang makes a point. Contractions are
also seen as being too informal for college writing.
Another mistake is the use of “flavorful”
adjectives that are distracting to the reader or gives
the reader an unclear sense of the writer’s purpose.
An example would be using “the wonderful world of
pop culture.” Here the reader has not established
her position on the topic because the phrase could be
interpreted as sarcasm or perhaps that the writer really
enjoys popular culture. Make sure that you are clear that
writing a formal class paper requires a tone much
different than that of an e-mail to a friend. You should
also consider your voice when writing class assignments.
I always stress reflexive writing, and I will never make
the statement that the first person should be avoided in
class assignments. In some instances, though, reflexivity
can become overbearing as your personal insights detract
from the analysis in the paper.
Audience
We all write for different people. An e-mail we compose
to a friend will often have writing short-cuts that are
possible because of shared knowledge between the two
parties. For this class you are required to write for an
audience which might be defined as the social science
community. Do not assume that you are writing strictly
for your instructor. Though I will assess your class
writing, do not write things in your paper which are not
clearly established or clarified. Do not assume that I
“will know what you’re talking about,”
even if we spoke about your paper outside of class. I
grade all of your papers relative to the class, which
means that I am not expecting that your work will be read
by other anthropologists and sociologists. I do require
that you think carefully about your audience and consider
how other sociologists and anthropologists go about
understanding, interpreting and writing about the social
worlds which we all inhabit.
Topic
Defining and clarifying your topic is a key to writing
quality papers for my courses. I generally assign paper
topics in my courses. In fact, I list them on your
syllabus so that you can start on your paper topics
sooner rather than later. When you read over a paper
assignment ask yourself the following questions:
(1) What is the assignment? Do I understand the
assignment? If not, when will I consult the instructor to
get help in writing my paper?
(2) How do I prepare for the assignment? Do I need to
gather information, perhaps from the Web, library or
“in the field?” How long will it take me to
prepare for the paper? When will I begin the assignment?
(3) What examples will I need to write a successful
paper? How can I assure that my ideas and examples are
clearly integrated in my writing?
Purpose
As the A to Z guide offers us, “at the onset of the
writing process, you need to decide on your purpose and
then make sure you draft, revise, and edit your paper
that everything works toward accomplishing that
goal” (pp. 8-9). Some of our assignments may require
library research work. If that is the case, plan to spend
additional time working on research. Some assignments
might require other aspects leading up to the paper such
as web research, interviews or field observations. Always
plan ahead and think about the purpose of your writing.
Writing
the Paper
We now need to cover some of the practical aspects of
writing successful class papers. Consider each of the
following aspects of writing as you plan new papers and
as you think about papers which were less successful than
those you will write in the future.
Main
Idea
In formal English class papers you are required to have a
thesis which clearly articulates your central idea.
Though I do not require you to follow a specific paper
form in writing our class assignments, you need to be
sure that you do have a central idea or thesis when you
write a paper. Your main idea or thesis should be
specific to your topic and it should relate to the paper
assignment I have established for you. In some cases
there is leeway in the assignment and it is your
responsibility to come up with an effective paper. This
begins with having a central idea. Think of the central
idea as a theme in music which is then further analyzed
as in musical variations.
Assertions
You need to support all of your assertions. If you make
the statement in your paper, “I believe that
capitalism negatively affects the institutional
structures of U.S. Society,” you must tell me why
you believe this to be true, Again, do not assume that I
will know what you mean, even if we discussed the idea in
class. When you get a chance read or reread
Aristotle’s On Rhetoric. One of the most important
insights for any writer is given to us by Aristotle.
Rhetoric involves persuasion and our writing can be seen
as the attempt to persuade the reader of the validity of
our ideas and assertions. Make sure that you back-up your
points.
Organization
One of the major problems with class papers is the lack
of organization in our writing. It is a good idea to
pre-write and plan your writing before you begin to
“pound the keys.” Successful writing is always
organized and successful writers always show (persuade)
their readers the path toward the clearing. When you
establish your thesis or main point in the beginning of
your paper ask yourself what you need to do in order to
drive home this point by paper’s end. A good way to
work on better paper organization is to produce a working
outline of your paper. Bring this paper into office hours
and work with the instructor on refining your paper
organization. Again, the more prep work you do as a
writer will ensure a better writing process and,
ultimately, a much better final paper.
Development
In addition to having a clear thesis and having good
organization, a successful paper should offer the reader
development. Development means that you work towards the
goal of establishing your thesis through numerous angles.
Two purposes are served by development: (1) You establish
more proof (evidence) by showing your reader examples
that support your claims. (2) You persuade your reader by
showing her that you understand the topic because you
have developed it. If you are writing a research paper,
do not just string together a bunch of quotes, especially
block quotes. Instead make connections between authors
and their ideas. In a “thought paper” be sure
that you develop your own ideas as you would those of
others in a research paper. A common problem with
development is the writer who makes the same point in
numerous paragraphs or making irrelevant or vacuous
points through underdeveloped examples or ideas.
Beginnings
and Endings
In addition to having good development throughout your
paper, you need to have clear and well-written
introductions and conclusions. Your introduction should
key the reader into your main point, signaling important
issues you plan to consider in your paper. A conclusion
is important in establishing what you have said and
proven in your writing. Try to avoid ready-made
conclusions that just summarize what you have already
said. Instead, use the conclusion to draw attention to
the specific insights of your paper topic.
Analysis
A major goal of any social science paper is to
develop your topic using critical social scientific
methods of investigation. Analysis is defined in
Webster’s New Twentieth-Century Dictionary as
“a separating or breaking up of any whole into its
parts so as to find out their nature, proportion,
function, relationship, etc.” In addition to being
part of successful paper development, analysis shows your
reader that you have insight—you know about the
topic and you can offer the reader creative variations of
the topic. When writing a social science paper be sure
that you have analysis. Ultimately your analysis should
have a goal, which is typically proving your thesis
statement. Analysis with no goal becomes very cumbersome
in writing.
Critical
Thinking and Creativity
You might find the following comments on your papers:
“So what?” “What does this mean?”
“What does this prove?” “Why” What
each of these comments attempts to get at is the need to
clearly and critically express yourself in writing your
paper. Critical thinking is a must for social science
papers. This type of thought shows your reader that you
have indeed thought about your topic and that you have
done so in a creative, unique and sometimes unexpected
way. Simply restating ideas from the book, though
accurate, leaves the reader feeling unfulfilled. When
writing your papers think about your assignments in new
and creative ways.
Construction
One of the most easily avoidable problems in paper
writing is the simple spelling or grammar error. If your
paper has more than four spelling and/or grammar errors,
it will generally not be a successful paper. Some people
have written papers that were good in terms of content
and ideas but were full of so many construction problems
that the papers were unreadable. If I mark
“const.” or “construction” on your
paper, it indicates that you need to improve on this
area. One of the simplest things you can do is run the
spell-check feature on your word processing program.
Spell-checking is only a start, however, as mistakes like
“effect” instead of “affect” can only
be checked by a manual read-through of your paper. Again,
I highly recommend giving your paper to a friend to read.
This is one of the best ways to discover construction
mistakes that will bring down your paper grade. Also, take
advantage of the excellent Learning Assistance Center on
campus to get help on formal writing problems.
Presentation
Any paper you turn in should be professionally presented.
You should be proud of the paper that you present to your
instructor. This means making sure that your paper looks
good, physically. Again, follow the format and keep in
mind the following:
(1) Staple your papers. I will deduct points from papers
that are not stapled. It is your responsibility to staple
them. Do not turn in paper-clipped papers as pages may be
lost.
(2) Do not turn in papers that have faint ink or cannot
be easily read.
(3) No plastic covers of any sort.
(4) Make sure that your papers have your name and paper
title on them. Do not write in information in pen or
pencil. That is sloppy.
(5) Save your paper on disk. This eliminates problems
related to losing your paper. Papers are also good
reference sources for the future. As a collection, your
old papers will allow you to see how your writing has
progressed and what sorts of problems still exist in your
writing.
(6) No late papers. Read over the late paper policy on
your syllabus. Late papers mean major point deductions.
(7) Do not plagiarize. Plagiarism is a very serious
offense of academic dishonesty.
Paper Length
Failure to fulfill the writing assignment’s
requirements means large point deductions. Read over each
assignment and make sure that you:
(1) Double-space
(2) Use one-inch margins on all sides of the page
(3) Use a 12-point Times or Times New Roman font
(4) Number your pages
If you have questions about these requirements please
talk to me. As well, look at the sample page I have
attached. This is what your paper should look like when
you turn it in. Any papers which do not meet these
requirements will lose major points.
The
Pleasure of the Text
Writing can and should be pleasurable to you. Work on
these suggestions and your writing will improve. Talk to
your instructor when problems arise and be sure to be
proactive in both your writing and your studies. When all
of this is done, you can worry less about “finishing
a paper on time” and more about the ideas and
creative avenues you wish to explore in your writing.
Good luck!!!
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